Five Sentence Fiction: Frozen

The monster that took my babies shuffles forward. He sits upon his horrid throne, crown affixed and smiling beatifically at his audience. He speaks, and his words will echo with the sick and depraved for generations. A thrown switch, and his muscles jerk, then freeze, as electricity courses through him.

I feel nothing.

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Lillie McFerrin Writes

For Lillie McFerrin’s Five Sentence Fiction. The prompt word this week: Frozen.


5 thoughts on “Five Sentence Fiction: Frozen

  1. Excellent story – background to conclusion in only five sentences!

  2. As far as feelings go. The last line in particular sent shivers down my spine.
    Excellent and highly creative take on the prompt.
    Keep it up

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