summer evening
a breeze turns leaves over
abandoned book (credit: Nicole the Local Artist)
reality exposes worlds of fantastical truths (c. J. Milburn)
My “completion” for Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga #26: Nicole’s “Summer Evening”. The challenge is to add your own two-line stanza to an existing haiku chosen by Chevrefeuille. Traditionally, each line should have 7 syllables, but that is just a guideline.
Head over and join in with your own stanza to this wonderful haiku.
Hope you enjoy.
Happy Reading and Writing!
J. Milburn
Writing To Be Noticed 
I think it flows wonderfully….what is up with the middle of the night postings? lol
I’m still readjusting my schedule after going back to work after the break. I need to go to bed earlier so I’m not so tired I don’t feel like writing when I get home 😀
I’m always up for a good expose! (Can’t figure out how to get the accent on the “e,” where it belongs.)
My Tan Renga Completion
I can never figure out how to do the accents either. Thanks for reading!
Nice completion!
This one is touching.
Darn that reality-always interfering!Loved it JM:-)
Thanks! Yeah, reality has a way of intruding at the most inopportune time 😀
Ha!ha!So true 😉