Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #25-Beautiful Dreams

 

fair-colored windows –
the barren break forth in song
better than words                         (Angie)

laughing eyes proclaim with joy
smiling babe, cooing first thoughts     (J. Milburn)
 

This week’s haiku for Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga challenge #25 comes from Angie at the Angie Inspired blog, and is titled “Beautiful Dreams.” The challenge of a Tan Renga is to take a haiku and add another stanza of two lines with 7 syllables for each line.

Hope you enjoy.

Happy Reading and Writing!

J. Milburn

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8 thoughts on “Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #25-Beautiful Dreams

  1. awwww I like laughing eyes.

  2. A gorgeous completion of this Tan Renga Jeremy. Thanks!

  3. The barren give birth. Joyous ending! I like it.

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