Carpe Diem #363 – Aleph

Sweet forgiveness sought

from violin’s dulcet tones

for past betrayals

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My attempt at 2014’s first prompt from Carpe Diem Haiku Kai: Aleph by Paulo Coelho. I admit, I’m not familiar with the novel, so mine is based on the synopsis kindly provided by Kristjaan. Click on the link to read about it. So much reading to do!

Hope you enjoy.

Happy Reading and Writing!

J. Milburn

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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9 thoughts on “Carpe Diem #363 – Aleph

  1. very nicely done haiku 🙂

  2. Awesome Jeremy … you have caught the whole story of “Aleph” in just three lines … really a great haiku you have shared here. Happy New Year and I hope you will stay on participating here at Carpe Diem.

  3. magicalmysticalteacher

    May the dulcet strains of the violin bring you much happiness in 2014!

  4. This one leaves me with questions. I hope you continue the journey and maybe they will be answered.

  5. What a great story… I loved how you condensed it into those three lines.

  6. That was nice, to dig into the storyline. Well done there.

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