Teddy leaped off the stairs, cape flapping in the breeze.
“Take off the dog’s blanket,” Mommy said. “You know it makes me sneeze.”
“But I’m a superhero, Mom!” he yelled as he jumped on the chair.
Mommy gave him the LOOK as she brushed little Molly’s hair.
Teddy crawled under the tree to give the presents a poke.
“Teddy, wait until tomorrow,” Mommy said. “This is not a joke.”
Teddy said, “But it’s Christmas Eve, and I want to open something.”
Mommy said, “Just wait, dear. Who knows what Santa will bring?”
Teddy ran upstairs, slamming his door with a BOOM!
He was so bored, he pretended to go camping in his room.
He turned on his music, to see how loud he could sing.
He sang so loud, that he never heard the phone ring.
He grabbed the blanket off his bed to set up his play-tent.
Then Mommy came in, with tears in her eyes. “Ted, there’s been an accident.”
Mommy said, “Daddy’s car was hit when someone ran the light.”
“He’s in the hospital and we’re going to see him tonight.”
“I need you to be a big-boy,” Mommy said. “And help with Molly, okay?”
Teddy just nodded his head, for there was nothing he could say.
Teddy held Molly’s hand after they climbed into the car.
And didn’t let go one time, even though the hospital was very far.
A nurse showed up and took them down a big, bright hospital hall.
Teddy held on to Molly, making sure she didn’t fall.
Daddy sat up when they entered the room, arms held open wide.
Mommy and Molly ran in for hugs, careful of Daddy’s side.
Teddy stayed back, waiting, letting Molly get hugs for a while.
“Come here my little superhero,” Mommy said with a smile.
Teddy ran forward into Daddy’s arms, happy as he could be.
He didn’t care what Santa brought. He had the gift of family.
The End.
This is for Susanna Leonard Hill’s 3rd Annual Holiday Writing Contest.
From her post :
You wrote about one of those scenarios that I always worry about! Glad Teddy got the best gift of Christmas after all. 🙂
I think with all the travel of the holidays that that particular worry is pretty common. I know I’ve had a few close shaves on snowy Holiday nights! Thanks for reading and commenting!
Not all mishaps are funny, and your story puts what’s important smack into perspective. Nice job, and Happy Holidays! :0)
Thank you!
Family is the best gift of all.
Agreed! Thank you for reading!
I love the way you tell stories. I was actually nervous reading this because a close friend of mine lost his father in a car accident on Christmas Eve when we were in school. I was relieved to see a happy ending.
Thank you, Anja. I’m sorry to hear that happened to your friend. While the subject matter was a bit weighty for a children’s book, no way was I going to have anything but a happy ending. This story would probably traumatize a child enough without going full on dark! About your first sentence, the feeling is mutual 😉
Awww thank you.
Lovely story– nice to see this fresh take on the contest theme!
Thank you for reading!
Great reminder – drive carefully everyone!
Good luck J.!
This was such a sweet story, and told so well in rhyme. I’m so glad it has a happy ending. Great job!
Oh this could’ve been tragic. So glad you turned it into a “recognizing the spirit of Christmas” story!
Oh so sad! I’m glad Teddy understood the gift of family!
Heartwarming, it brings home the true meaning of the holidays.
Oh my goodness! A true mishap, and the kind we all worry about! I’m so glad that Daddy was okay and that Teddy was able to rise to the occasion and be a real super hero. Thanks for a heart-warming story, and for joining in the holiday contest fun!
Thank you! And thank you for hosting! I was a bit worried it might be a little dark for a children’s story and I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Family is what it’s all about and your story brings that message home.
Great job! Reminds us of what’s really important and it’s not stuff.
Your story had the same message as mine did only differently.
Merry Christmas! 🙂
I could hardly wait to get to the end to see if all would be well. Thank you for a beautiful Christmas story with lots of tension and a beautiful message.:)
You’re welcome! Thank you for reading, and I’m glad you liked it!
Wow, thank goodness for a happy ending! Very thoughtful story.
a difficult and frightening concept to deal with in a children’s story but you captured it beautifully and left us with a hopeful ending. well done
Thank you so much for reading! I’m glad you liked it!
This story put a lump in my throat. I have a superhero Grandson and could imagine Teddy every step of the way. Great story.
Whoa. What a mishap. 😦 Glad it turned out right-ish! 🙂
A nice story of family. Apr with the weather we’ve been having. 🙂
great reading-beeeesworld